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Post by Redwhisker on Apr 12, 2013 21:16:00 GMT -5
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[/s] Cloverpaw Cloverstorm[/ul] Age: Rank: Clan: Gender: Picture: [/url].[/ul] Short Description: Long Description: Personality: History: RP Sample: [/size][/blockquote] |
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Post by Shiningheart on Apr 25, 2013 13:59:29 GMT -5
Give another sentence for personality, as you're a little short. History as well. It needs to be 150 at least, and you have 139. Also, is she ThunderClan or WindClan? You have ThunderClan in the title but WindClan in the bio. |
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